WALT: add details to our writing. We try to say what we did in order and use words such as first, next, then and finally. We say how we felt.
In Ki o rahi I first felt really excited. Then we started the game. My team was called Ki Oma. It was really, really fun. Next, my class came and we did writing. I liked it and then we ate lunch. - Thea
We played Ki o rahi. It was fun. I threw the ball at the barrow and then Whaea Gina blew the whistle. Finally, we went back to class- Lily
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